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If I Could Stop Time
Contributed by
DannerSwa
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Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:05:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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If I Could Stop Time
By Danner C. Swa
One day I will stop time.
If not for a moment,
Then for a lifetime,
And live it dormant.
I sit here counting the beads,
The path of time unpredictable.
Who knows where it will lead,
When time becomes unchangeable.
I take some time to wonder,
Till there is nothing left to ponder.
Cigarette after cigarette,
Drinking tequila like water.
If I could rewind to that moment,
I would have a second chance,
I would do what then I couldn’t
And ask, “Could I have this dance?”
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DannerSwa
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2005-10-07 03:05:24]
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Re: If I Could Stop Time
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by OzChick on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:18:30 AM AEST
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This is a nice little poem but I think there is a problem with line four. "And leave it dormant."
I think would read better. As for the rest, good write. Well done. |
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Re: If I Could Stop Time
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:39:24 AM AEST
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Very sad but touching and beautifull.
Hope ya feel better really soon.
hugs,
emy |
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