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Best Friends In The End
Contributed by
Sae
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Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:51:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I never knew the end would come so soon
everything seemed alright
until that afternoon
I was there for you until that night
I had to go home
and you said you'd be fine
I left you all alone
now I wish I'd had more time
It should've never ended like this
Now I'm sittin here by your grave
Wondering where my heart is
I wish that you wouldn't have touched that blade
I push my hands into the dirt
leave them there and start to cry
I never imagined how bad this would hurt
Why did you have to die?
I wipe my tears with dirty hands
take the necklace out of my pocket
push myself up and make myself stand
Took one last look at the locket
It was a picture of you and me
Under the picture it said "best friends"
I put it on your grave, thats where it should be
We will always be together even though it is the end
Copyright ©
Sae
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2005-10-07 01:51:39]
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Re: Best Friends In The End
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 02:04:07 AM AEST
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| I like this, your poem tells a great story even though sad I have to smile that you did not dwell in sadness but got up ( in your poem ) and moved on still holding that friendship dear. |
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Re: Best Friends In The End
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by brew on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:46:44 AM AEST
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Your writes, are good. A nice dedication, for a friend, that held a special place within.! Keep memories, and it WILL always hold a special place.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Best Friends In The End
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:16:26 AM AEST
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| Nice really nice you do have a gift from God always use that. |
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