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love
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 08:37:20 PM in AEST
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that she doesnt care if she got in trouble cos i was at her work all day
that shes trouble
that shes as clingy as me
that shes as dodgy as me
that she loves me as much as i love her
her smile
her voice
her hair
her piercings
every inch of her body
that when i look at her all i see is love and happiness for the rest of my life
that well be together forever
that i trust her with everything
that i never have to be unhappy again
that i can make her happy and always want to
that nothing could ever stop me loving her
that shed travel across the country 2 spend the nite with me and that id do the same
her eyes
her smell
that shell never judge me
that shes my world
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Re: love
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:50:18 AM AEST
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| I like it, I hope reality reveals the same love as this poem. With time and commitment it will. |
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Re: love
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:23:47 AM AEST
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wwwwo!!! It's awesome.
One question. Why don't he have his own site 'cause I see great talent. thanks for sharing this.
smiles,
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Re: love
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:33:01 AM AEST
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that was really cute,
good job
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