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Screaming the sounds of the sea.
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 07:05:16 PM in AEST
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A fragile night consumes the gardens of my love.
The night is velvet, sick by the simplicities of life.
The night is velvet stars vomited along the waters head.
Time endures me, considers me, disregards my love,
opens me to lower my head;
opens me to kneel before this ragged page, and cry my grief consumes me.
I am an angry clarity, spitting my fingers over empty, useless words.
It is in a drunken sun drinking deeply the sounds of sand to quench an endless thirst.
The words continue, seep deeply into nonsense, deform reason.
Consider this: The night is silk screaming the sounds of the sea;
a lion finds its sleep;
the prairies of my love find deep, deep loss, scorching the sands with my fingers.
Consider this then, the day is broken by my sleep;
the leopards find the snow.
This my dream.
It is an empty dream,
but it is my dream.
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Re: Screaming the sounds of the sea.
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by RAGEyourDREAM on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 07:53:15 PM AEST
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I really liked this, the comparisions I could really invision.
Great job. |
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Re: Screaming the sounds of the sea.
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:42:30 AM AEST
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i love how much your poems make me think
It is in a drunken sun drinking deeply the sounds of sand to quench an endless thirst.
The words continue, seep deeply into nonsense, deform reason.
Consider this: The night is silk screaming the sounds of the sea;
amazing write |
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Re: Screaming the sounds of the sea.
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by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:10:39 PM AEST
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i found it remarkable that i was able
to find my way into your hellish quagmire of a dream ...
you made it tough to do so ...
but in time it was worth it ...
tho im not so sure i completly found myself all the way in it ...
perhaps, lucky for me!
fantasmagoric of a write
`·.¸¸.* Arsenic
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