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Death It Shall Be
Contributed by
fredsmith
on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 06:38:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Death It Shall Be
They make me sad,
Ruining my day.
They seem so glad,
I have nothing to say.
I just want to die,
That’s how I feel.
My life is a lie,
It cannot be real.
Death it shall be,
From all my pain.
Why can’t they see,
I’m going insane.
Sorry for what I done,
I never meant it to happen.
They thought it was all fun,
As they where clapping.
They went to far,
If only they knew.
It left me a scar,
What else could I do.
Heaven I can’t go,
I’ve done too much.
He would say no,
For the sins and such.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-10-06 18:38:09]
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Re: Death It Shall Be
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by radstraightedge on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 07:08:35 PM AEST
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wow. that was really good. i liked it a lot.
-lexie |
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Re: Death It Shall Be
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by Sae on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 02:31:29 AM AEST
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| I like this. Good job on your writing :) |
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Re: Death It Shall Be
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by guiltycircles on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:34:47 AM AEST
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| well done, |
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Re: Death It Shall Be
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by strider on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 10:59:50 AM AEST
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| this is great I like the rhymes, well written |
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Re: Death It Shall Be
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:23:18 AM AEST
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Very strong and well rhymed too! it was all good
and i especially liked the last stanza.. great finish
keep it up |
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