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separated from myself
Contributed by
purplestary
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Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 12:14:43 PM in AEST
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separate from everything i knew
separate from where i was safe
separate from the real emotion
separate from love
separate from where the grass was green
separate from where the sky was clear
separate from where i was always right
separate from the self esteem gained
closer to falling off the edge of this place
closer to dying in the heat of the pain
closer to thinking this must be a dream
closer to the reality that nothings the same
closer to knowing i have made a mistake
closer to the truth, i was where i belonged
closer to wishing i would just wake up
closer to knowing i will die in vein
closer to being completely alone
closer to wanting to hide from it all
closer to vulnerable, closer to you
closer to hate and welcoming death...
what was i thinking?
why didn't anyone stop me?
didn't anyone care that i was messing with fate?
why does mom tell me now that i was wrong?
where was her opinion when it mattered the most?
why is everyone here so utterly fake?
why does everything said have to be a lie?
where can i turn when noone is true?
who can i trust when i hurt inside?
separate from the place and people i knew
at least i felt safe and knew i was loved
closer to you, who "forgets" that you love me
how do i tell someone how wrong i have been
I know i SHOULD stay, my future at steak
but what would you do, if you made this mistake?
How could i do what i did that day?
i thought that i had to do something
i had to ease the pain, the ache.
but now i hurt more then ever.
what a crime to myself
now i'm going insane
nowhere to turn
nowhere to run
noone is real
nothings the same
now i'm closer to falling off the edge of this place....
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Re: separated from myself
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:48:26 PM AEST
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this is incredible and to me it seems as though you have the answers closer than you may think
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Re: separated from myself
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by remote on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 04:12:32 PM AEST
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| What mistake? |
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Re: separated from myself
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 05:24:42 PM AEST
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This is absolutely amazing. Mistake you say? No mistake this is fantastic. A brilliant write which captivates the reader from beginning to end. Well done.
*hugs*
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Re: separated from myself
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by Emotionally_Muted on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:39:31 AM AEST
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I agree with the other posters, this is without a doubt a captivating piece. However I am curious about what the mistake was... but none the less whatever it was, it can be corrected given the effort.
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