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Childhood Tears
Contributed by
softlyspoken
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Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 02:24:28 AM in AEST
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I sit and forsake my embedded feelings, I am just one who you stare and foe me away. Deliberate my chorus of rollercoasters that prevail an unwanted mascarade. The mountains are my friends, while the flesh are my turbulant caged in snakes.
The chain that is wrapped upon my inter-most desires are excluded from the magnetic fields of sunrays. Delight is my face, but underneath my tone is a abolished frown tainted beyond my years of childhood.
I crawl my way out of this dilema like a sinister concubine, I am not one who will still like a sash, but one who will hunt like a hound, as they sear my heart, my beats are lonesome as the blood bonafides my emotions of abandonment, my troubled eyes are a sight of wonder.
A mask I glue to hide the fashis of my wrecked ship. The sun that use to brighten my soul has now turned it to hollow happiness, the grass that was once green is now black-- black is everything, its of my whole being.
I am not overwhelmed by the bright colors that disentegrated amongst my surroundings, they are not gold that once glistened or silver that once shined. I yet come to realize that the orge that is haunting will haunt forever until I meet that straight away path-- path of purity, and yet I cry-- I cry my childhood tears...
Copyright ©2003 Joann Marie Santos
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2005-10-06 02:24:28]
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Re: Childhood Tears
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:29:00 AM AEST
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A great-n-powerfull write.
Brilliantly written and yet it heart tugging.
Keep writing as one can feel the power in this write.
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Re: Childhood Tears
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by crazy on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 09:56:32 AM AEST
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wow im breathless its so good i cant desribe how much i can relate to this poem .
i feel locked in a cage of deaath and hate jut to read a poem like this makes it a lil easyer knowing people are feeling the same way i hope you will write more like this. what a wonderful poem a true poet |
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