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Assignment 15
Contributed by
daniel
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Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
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SongLyrics
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i look inside my head, and i cant find
the song you want me to be
i can try to sing, but all i will bring
is something you cant ever see
i clean up this mess, taking quite awhile
so necessary i dont know how
i dig and i dig down, nothing to be found
excavation cancellation now
looking at the rose
in those deep eyes
why God only knows
i havent been wise
if you want to know, my mind has gone
away from here in this place
still looking all around, where is it now
lost in the shadows of a face
shes so captivating, shes got a hold of my heart
its so invigorating, alive now and not just a part
breathing so deeply, fragrance of my rose
she has all my attention here
i hope the time last, better at each pass
she passes me a look so dear
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Re: Assignment 15
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 10:57:22 AM AEST
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Awww, Danny, you are definately a romantic... this is gorgeous :), lucky girl your rose is.
~Dani~
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Re: Assignment 15
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by OreO on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 12:26:06 PM AEST
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This one brought tears to my eyes, it's so full of passion and desire and yet ...there's somthing else there that weighs upon you...it's mysteriously breathtaking, very captivating and keeps one wondering about you because each write that you take upon yourself to write...is different......yet the same....beautiful daniel...
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