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a gentle tune to wash away apathy
Contributed by
classicfailedhero
on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A lento in my head swishes use from my mind
'Are you finding joy in forlorn touch', cooes the tune.
Repetition is my answer, repition is the sound.
Eyes squeezed disdainfuly, flowers fall from slits.
They make absorbing patterns, all who see is barren.
This noise falls not on deaf ears, all the unity exists within it.
Countless hands in a pose, we're having fun.
My ditty lathers common lonesome insanity
My private ballroom starts to swirl, the chorus swells.
Seeds from a plant spread forth, dancing to it all.
Fixations coaxe metallic sounds from their hands
On this dancefloor of intoxicated inability
Love love, suck suck, kiss kiss (words removed by mod 11)
Spiralling out of youth control
The brass slowly file out, strings are soon to follow.
A janitor mops the remnants away, he whistles a private tune.
He dances with the mop, imagining a partner.
Never companion lost, but always never found.
The ballroom is empty, though always frequented
A faint, a gentle tune, to wash away all
My seminal smile goes unoticed, nothing profound in that
Simple truth, it just isn't apperent.
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classicfailedhero
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2005-10-05 22:28:57]
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Re: a gentle tune to wash away apathy
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:48:21 PM AEST
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Very nice.... I like the analagy of the Ballroom
GODBLESS
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Re: a gentle tune to wash away apathy
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:16:56 PM AEST
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This is rather abstract, but it stirred something in me...You have alot of different thoughts floating around in this piece, and it makes the reader stop and reflect. Nicely done!
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