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pain
Contributed by
JenJen
on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:44:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There's too much pain
To keep inside
There's nowhere to run
There's nowhere to hide
They've taken away
The only person by my side
~xXx~
Copyright ©
JenJen
... [
2005-10-05 16:44:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST (User
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short but sweet
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:40:11 PM AEST (User
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Immediate
As immediate as your loss
How unfortunate |
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:05:20 PM AEST (User
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very straightfoward poem.. its short but i like it great job at expression in this
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:25:18 PM AEST (User
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Short and sweet,,It have its character...God Bless! |
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by memories_mist on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 06:07:48 AM AEST (User
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Sometimes it only takes a few lines to express a great deal of emotions.
Hugz |
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