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Paths to the Unknown
Contributed by
Joe_Cool
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:35:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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At home within a tunnel dark
My hands throw out the bits of spark
That fly to several different destinations
Each one contains some hope and fear
That my bright future ever nears
My blind corners will be paths before I rise
Right now I dream of what's to be,
Tomorrow's the reality
When painted ponies turn to thoroughbreds
Providential fingers push me on
To work that has been left undone
It waits for me alone to fill its void
Though former paths have led me home
The paths to what is yet unknown
Will someday lead me, safe into your arms
Copyright ©
Joe_Cool
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2005-10-05 15:35:53]
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Re: Paths to the Unknown
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:58:03 PM AEST
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interesting write i always dream of whats to be cool wording
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Re: Paths to the Unknown
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:59:37 PM AEST
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when I read this I think of the smell of the earth and great pieces of wood burning deeply
on an open fire. of trees swaying in the wind at night, the rain decorating them, and along with them the sky.
the reason: your clear love of the earth;
your phrases: 'bits of spark' , 'fingers push me on' and 'paths have led me home' are rich for me..
thanks y
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Re: Paths to the Unknown
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:07:06 PM AEST
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this is a very intresting poem i actually enjoyed it it makes you think.. about journeys in life.. you never know where you are going to end up but there is always hope and fear in everything great job
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Re: Paths to the Unknown
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by Dreamchaser on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:39:08 AM AEST
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"Right now I dream of what's to be,
Tomorrow's the reality"
Very true. I like this poem. It is thought provoking. Great job!
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