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Yours
Contributed by
miss_jules
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I were the sky
I would give you the sun
to warm you and light your life
the way you light mine.
If I were the earth
I would give you my greens
to feed and nourish you
sustain you as you sustain me.
If I were the heavens
I would give you eternity
to bathe you in my paradise
the way you are my rapture.
But I am not the sky
I have no stars to give.
I am not the earth
I have no pastures to offer.
And I am not the heavens
I cannot promise unending ecstasy.
But I am yours.
I have arms to hold you in
lips to kiss you with
eyes to lose yourself in
and a heart to love you with.
I promise you this love
until the sky falls
the earth crumbles
and the heavens fade.
Copyright ©
miss_jules
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2005-10-05 14:58:45]
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Re: Yours
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by xofireangel27 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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very good, very pictoral, keep up the great work.
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:05:21 PM AEST
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if i was a emontional man i would really enjoy this just kidding very lovely write
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Re: Yours
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by sweetestsin101 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:15:14 PM AEST
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aww!!!!!! thats really sweet, and really good. 2 thumbs up. i would give u more, but thats all i hav. lol. keep it up.
~*~LEXI~*~ |
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Re: Yours
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by mccscratch on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:23:08 PM AEST
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| this is fantastic... |
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Re: Yours
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by Dreamchaser on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:34:09 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem . Great write. |
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Re: Yours
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:34:07 AM AEST
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As a new member, you are coming in with great style. This was a beautiful poem, expressing love in an amazing way. I bow.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Yours
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:23:43 AM AEST
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great write on this poem ..
welcome to ypdc.. |
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