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Jack in the box
Contributed by
SkC_Cutie
on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:54:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just a box
Nothing great
To offer
Nothing great
To hide
Just a box
Of hidden secrets
Just a box
Of hidden cries
Inside there is a toy
Just a simple little toy
A sad toy
That is left
Wilting inside
One man sees teardrops
One man sees its smirks
Of all life’s problems
Of all life’s past jerks
No one understands
This toy
And no one ever will
So back
In its box
It goes
For another
Moment
To be still
Just a box
Of hidden secrets
Just a box
Of hidden pain
This toy has nothing to offer
This little box
Has nothing to gain
So it stays
In its box
To keep
All the bad
Out
So all the good
Memories
Will remain
Copyright ©
SkC_Cutie
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2005-10-05 11:54:52]
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Re: Jack in the box
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:31:47 PM AEST
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wow what a way to describe a poem i really liked the vision
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Re: Jack in the box
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by smilez101 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:53:38 PM AEST
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| i really liked the concept of it. This was really creative and thoughtful. |
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