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What happens when?
Contributed by
reecy
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:31:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When her touch becomes cold,
When her grip becomes loose
When the conversations have run dry
And her sentences are left undone.
When her hidden habits appear like chicken pox
And her car is never home
When there’s no money to put food on the table
And she refuses to answer her phone.
When her gaze is blank,
And her thoughts aren’t there.
When she’s always out
And you start to care
When she realises she rushed,
In to taking what was mine
And shes knonws she wants a break,
As she disrescepeted time.
As she speaks from far across the room,
With icy breathe she tells you it’s not enough,
With her baggage in the hall,
Her face looks pale and empty
As she tells you bluntly
She never truly loved you at all.
Copyright ©
reecy
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2005-10-05 09:31:13]
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Re: What happens when?
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:35:39 AM AEST
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Wot can i say, u hit the nail right on the head with that one, Woo that was brilliant, well done
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Re: What happens when?
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:06:42 PM AEST
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a very true write and nice vision
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Re: What happens when?
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by jheng on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 11:35:46 AM AEST
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great one. i have a friend who recently broke up with his girl, i can truly appreciate the poem |
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