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Small Dose of Silent Screaming
Contributed by
Teenagedirtbag
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:51:56 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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So this is my masterpiece
Just note that last syllable
Keep in mind, I'm not quite able
You see, I'm still feeble
So let's create this masterpiece
Next time boredom becomes us,
Pulling out the lighters is a must
Let's set it aflame, dump it out, and watch it rust!
Copyright ©
Teenagedirtbag
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2005-10-04 23:51:56]
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Re: Small Dose of Silent Screaming
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:12:38 AM AEST
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requiring all matches and lighters be left on the table by the door, i' d say you have some potential with this. i feel you should play around with it and see how much you could expand our veiw into it.
nice
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Re: Small Dose of Silent Screaming
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:46:54 AM AEST
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| Yes I agree. It would be good to see a continuation of this.Give it a go, Ros |
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