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Enough
Contributed by
fredsmith
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Enough
Why should they care,
There’s nothing left of me.
I gave them all a scare,
I’m dead cant they see.
What can I do,
I’m not to blame.
If only they knew,
Of all my pain.
I can’t take anymore,
I’ve had enough.
The pain I can’t ignore,
This is no bluff.
The cuts on my arm,
It had eased my life.
But I still wasn’t calm,
As I took the knife.
I had nothing to say,
It was now the end.
This would be the day,
An angel he would send.
My death wouldn’t go far,
No one would care.
My heart had a scar,
Why would they dare.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-10-04 23:14:56]
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Re: Enough
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:26:03 AM AEST
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Great writing but i pray it's just that, convencing write.
huggs, pryaer,
emy |
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Re: Enough
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:15:34 PM AEST
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| what an emotional write |
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Re: Enough
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by classicfailedhero on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:34:26 PM AEST
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| cool, a bit simplistic but i suppose that just shows the anti-glamour in takeing your life |
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Re: Enough
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by classicfailedhero on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:34:27 PM AEST
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| cool, a bit simplistic but i suppose that just shows the anti-glamour in takeing your life |
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Re: Enough
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by shattered_glass on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 04:00:01 AM AEST
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| woow this is heaps good.....hell emotional and like its got a deep meaning and well written i take my hat off to you way to go! |
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