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Hollow Feelings
Contributed by
Erinlyticia
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:45:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Another thought locked tight inside,
Divulge it not, in yourself confide
So small and delicate a mere child,
Aggreived in demise, subsequent denial
A door blocked, the end of dreams
Affection dies, ripped at seams
Forlorn in vacuity, who to blame?
Insecurity emerges, bury the shame
Rapt in his vigil, farewell to fate,
Impressions of melancholy, minutes too late
Aggressive and irate, wasted time
Heart pessimistic, undeserving swine
Pinch of pity, handful of grief
Uncertainty guilty, he the theif
A plea of mercy, from her bones
saturated in fury, hate he owns
Girl is distorted, new wintry slave
discarded bliss, unrelentless wave
Facade of strength, weakened spirit
Morbid regret, too numb to feel it
Copyright ©
Erinlyticia
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2005-10-04 19:45:07]
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Re: Hollow Feelings
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:49:16 PM AEST
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WoW what an outstanding write. I can feel your pain and anguish through ur words. I hope that all is well with you. An emotional deep write. Well done on presenting such a remarkable piece for us to read.
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Re: Hollow Feelings
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:44:22 PM AEST
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Very very good....God Bless
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