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Back in the Days..
Contributed by
xpixiexdustx
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:40:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Wish I could go back..
Back to a time where
I didn't know what it felt like
to be so empty, alone and unloved.
When the word "Depressed"
Didn't have a meaning
And "cutting" was only something mom did in the kitchen
Hate, was something I didn't know how to do..
When dreams were unshattered
and worries few
friendships held true
when decisions came easy
without the need to belong
and sharing feelings,
wasn't a wrong.
When worries didn't crowd my mind
with dark clouds of despair
hoping that I too,
have someone to find.
When my soul wasn't broken
and my heart, pure
when looking into the future...
everything seemed clear.
What I wouldn't give
to go back to the days
When life wasn't such a dark haze
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xpixiexdustx
... [
2005-10-04 19:40:44]
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Re: Back in the Days..
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:56:31 AM AEST
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so sorry that your life is so dark....you wrote your feelings with such raw emotion...
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Re: Back in the Days..
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:32:24 AM AEST
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What I get from this poem is a soul trying to get away from whatever is holding it back, yet, because of the uncertainties of new things, it is hesitant about what lays ahead.
Loved reading this.
~souLBro~ |
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Re: Back in the Days..
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:42:06 PM AEST
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| I understand how you feel. I am glad i can not go back, my mistakes are set and I can learn from them. I can learn to love and forgive and to give my heart in ways that i thought i could not do. I have to just get the focus off me to do that. |
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