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The Perfect Now
Contributed by
bugoron
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The twinkle in thine eyes,
Such as comets, paired and streaking,
Raining down Cupid's chaos from the skies
As I stand transfixed, enraptured by thy speaking.
"Yes."..."Yes." thou sayest; o' but what a simple word,
So long in coming, short in going, sweet in sounding.
Occasional bliss, soul crying out, the windows blurred.
Rushing tears and rushing footsteps, hearts pounding.
A soft kiss, a warm embrace.
Heaven on earth, if but for a moment, a perfect now.
Capturing perfection, I burn the image of thy face
Into memory. No thought so happy as this of thou.
Copyright ©
bugoron
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2005-10-04 15:56:19]
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Re: The Perfect Now
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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| a truly moving peace.. sort but so powerfull |
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Re: The Perfect Now
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:22:12 PM AEST
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| thy and thou......havn't read anything written in this way since Shakspeare.....you did it so well too....this was a beautiful write..i love it.. such beautiful words bring to life a beautiful moment...good job.... |
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Re: The Perfect Now
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:33:23 PM AEST
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| I love this, you expressed it beautifully. Well done! =) |
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Re: The Perfect Now
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 06:11:37 PM AEST
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I love the old english language. maybe thats why it caught my attention...
i simple loved it, the flow of words works so well..
thanks for sharing. |
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