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In Between the Storms
Contributed by
remote
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:05:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Since the beginning of the days
our life is tossed and turned
ripped apart by many a storms
These ones, the ones to come
shall all belong to the past
Looking out, through the dust
through the violent cruel winds
this world is not what it seems
Pure and tranquil it always is
as it is between the storms
When the sand storm like-
assault of thoughts begin
with dust blurring judgement
we are not what we think we are,
Just an incoherent caricatures
Let the storms of thoughts die
Let the dust of ignorance clear
Kill the commotions to reveal
our true self, as we always are
as we are in between the storms
Copyright ©
remote
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2005-10-04 14:05:58]
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Re: In Between the Storms
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:58:34 PM AEST
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interesting way to point things cool idea i liked it
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Re: In Between the Storms
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:09:39 PM AEST
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struggling forces.. preventing growth...watch out for the attack..
I got a grab hold on Jesus.. He calms my storms..
He can calm all storms..
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Re: In Between the Storms
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:04:14 PM AEST
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this poem is magnificent, truly a work of poetic art and could serve as a sociological
blueprint 4 man kind, well done.
" Let the dust of ignorance clear " Christ could couldn't have said better
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