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I Won’t Fear Love
Contributed by
Darkhorse71
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:23:48 PM in AEST
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I made my peace with misery
my friend who won’t betray;
but then you came into my life,
I don’t know what to say.
Starting over’s never easy,
new hopes and dreams to find;
to have to leave my special shell
as up this hill I climb.
To turn my back on my old friend
and crumble it to dust,
is as hard as any break-up;
I’m scared to have to trust.
But emptiness is not for me
I need to have that friend
that I know I will find in you;
I won’t fear love again.
darkhorse71
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by remote on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:01:54 PM AEST
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| Comfortable is the best state to be in, surely you mean complacent? |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:12:48 PM AEST
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If one gets too comfortable or complacent they quit striving for new horizons and just go along with the flow. To my way of thinking that is not a good thing. Thanks for your input.
john |
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:16:22 PM AEST
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The flow sweeps along without a hitch, very nice. I understand what you mean by 'comfortable' and it seems like the appropriate word to me. Being comfortable in some circumstances really is 'dangerous'...absolutely! In this case, being (formerly) comfortable in your fortress of misery was indeed a danger, to your well being and love of self. Now that you've found someone who you're willing to venture out of that 'comfort zone' for, it's great! Someone who cares about you, can only help you in the long run. So good for you for 'climbing that hill.' All the best, and you conveyed your honest feelings rather well in this piece. Nice job.
Scorp.
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:23:23 PM AEST
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i just like the poem it has a nice flow sorry i couldnt be more specific like the rest
but hey i liked it
r.m.wilder |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:46:34 PM AEST
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Excellent Write. I realy enjoyed this piece of work. How well you sang each verse. I feel you. Sometimes we can get lost in ourself and how much I agree with your sentiments of
"Comfortable is a dangerous state to be in"
Comfortable is easy, but easy isn't always right!
I fled from this before it sunk me in and took me over and much like you enjoyed the moments of finding someone to cherious.
Your poem made me reflect on my previous way and to enjoy my new findings of companionship.
Lovely write, thank you for sharing with all on YPDC.
Keep writing
SweetRyhthm
p.s. 5/5 |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:03:19 PM AEST
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Hey John this is a great write. It's great to see that you've found someone to venture out with. I wish u the best of luck. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Keep penning dearest John. It's a pleasure to read ur work.
*hugs*
Sue, ED. |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:56:24 AM AEST
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| very inspirational and uplifting to those who may be too comfortable in possibly negative surroundings. The rhyme and flow of the poem is extraordinary and well expressed.. thanks for sharing it and good luck!! |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 01:09:20 AM AEST
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Hmm very nice indeed.
well done. |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:38:57 AM AEST
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Hot ****,
Betta watch it or you'll have the planet chasing u 'round with your good written.
watch out don't let it hit u, u know cupid-n-his dart.
U gonna make it, my dear friend.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the mornin.
Huggs,
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by brew on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:30:00 PM AEST
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Hmmmmmmm comfortable, yet complacent,,,,,,,,,,its neither, Its just There,! never fel its what YOu want, it takes both.! To be comfortable, is soothing, yet, you have to have from them.! Dont ever HIDE the love, or any......
brew~ |
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 10:05:46 PM AEST
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wow John, how did I miss this one? wonderful
pentameter to this and your words were perfectly
chosen. The content is interesting to say the least.
"I won't fear love again"
Good on ya, mate! I am liking this very very much!
Well done John. Be proud! :~)
*hugs*
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Re: I Won’t Fear Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:14:41 PM AEST
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Thats great, I'm assuming you found someone !? If you did congrads, hope it all works out.
- Cassy |
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