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|| A trendy Suicide: A Show for the masses ||

Contributed by Desolated_Denial on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:01:17 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



Would you kill yourself ... if I told you to?
Would you destroy your life, if someone told you it was cool?
Would you be my puppet, if I asked you to?
Would you die for me, just because I wanted you?

You lose yourself, with every decision you make.
Life is your death, you're not good at it today.
You should give up, end it all right here.
You should kill yourself, suicide is your fear

Would you cut yourself, if I wanted to bleed?
Would you scar your self, just so I can see?
Would you trash yourself, just because I said it was neat?
Would you f*ck yourself, if that's all I said you need?

You lose yourself, with every decision you make.
Life is your death, you're not good at it anyway.
You should give up, end it all right here.
You should kill yourself, suicide is your fear.

Love is just another form of suicide.
Life is just another reason.
You are the victim of all our hate.
Your life is our collective treason.
Suicide is your salvation.
Suicide is your deciet.
Suicide is your only option.
Would you kill yourself just for me?




Copyright © Desolated_Denial ... [ 2005-10-04 13:01:17]
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Re: || A trendy Suicide: A Show for the masses || (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:58:47 PM AEST
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"Life is your death, you're not good at it today." Great line, "you'll get better at it one of these days" could follow very well. I commend you for your courage for this honest write.


Re: || A trendy Suicide: A Show for the masses || (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:35:56 PM AEST
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interesting write i wouldnt say bold since the story is old but interesting anuff i like the word play
r.m.wilder


Re: || A trendy Suicide: A Show for the masses || (User Rating: 1 )
by ladymaki on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 08:03:06 AM AEST
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You talk about suicide being trendy, but did you ever stop to think about trash talking teen angst as trendy? I've seen things about how 'emo' someone is, than actually 'emo' things.
Nice use of words though?




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