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My Sanctuary
Contributed by
black-bruised-n-broken
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:44:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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As i run this blade across my skin
I feel myself slip from this earth
I feel myself slip into an ulternate universe
A universe I've called my home
For so many years
Now it has become more then just home to me
It has become a place more of a place of comfort
It is not my home anymore
It is my sanctuary.
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2005-10-04 05:44:39]
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Re: My Sanctuary
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:08:40 AM AEST
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Pain as a sanctuary... it won't hold through much, I think. I pray you'll find a sturdy resting place, where your soul can sleep in peace. Still, I liked the poem. It expresses well your inner feelings and emotions. You communicate well on paper.
Take care.
David |
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Re: My Sanctuary
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:50:16 AM AEST
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| Great poem, the imagery in astounding. And how you seemed to captureso much emotion in so few of lines. Pain as a sanctuary; it has a bittersweat essence about it that I like in your poem. I do hope you can find some other release then pain though. Nice Write. |
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Re: My Sanctuary
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by DesolantDreamer on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:13:36 PM AEST
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| very compelling and deep. I understand that feeling. Oh and it makes perfict sence to me. |
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