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My Heart's Melody...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:18:07 AM in AEST
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Every night as the sun gently sets
The stars emerge to blanket the sky
Daisies close their petals gracefully
As the moon settles way up high
Rabbits burrow deep into their holes
The owls are now fully awake
The beautiful elegant white swan
Slumbers peacefully on top of the lake
My heart begins to nestle
Deep amongst the blazing stars
Where it hums a melody
Amidst tranquil settings so far
It sings a melody of hope
That one day soon it shall find love
An orchestra of tender emotions
Playing in tune way up above
My heart waits patiently
Till the essence of time is right
Where your heart shall sing
My heart's melody through out the night
In rhythm with each other
Two loving hearts shall play in tune
Underneath the starry night sky
Composed beneath the prevalent moon
My heart shall sing its melody
Every night and everyday
Until my heart's mesmerizing chords
Have you dancing merrily my way...
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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Fantastic write Sue!!! I love this! You excel at giving detailed and pleasing visuals to the reader. All while telling a story that we can not only relate to, but appreciate reading. Excellent job! The style you wrote this in was perfect for your emotions. The rhymes added to the potency of your words, and gave a melodic flow. Keep 'em coming my dear!!
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:55:41 AM AEST
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Incredibly vivid write!!! This was so picturesque and the hopeful emotions were a joy to read. Thanks for sharing this one.
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:13:45 AM AEST
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I adore this Sue..
if only for your fairy-tale like words..
and surreal idealism..
I can only hope for hope like this..
It's beautiful..
your longing is evident my friend..
Yours-
Billy
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:24:33 AM AEST
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An angel couldn't have wrote this better this
is beautiful i felt every word and verse and meaning and feeling and most of all you, a
masterpeice of artistic creation.
((((((Sue)))))))
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:00:10 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write ... surreal, with vivid images ... well done ... Jan |
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST
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i really love the way you connected nature, the cosmos and the heart all with music ...
a beautiful and soulful treat for one's innervision and senses ...
*´¨`·.¸¸.* Arsenic
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by strider on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:10:03 AM AEST
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Great poem Sue, I like the vivid flow of expression used here.
Keep the good work coming girl
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:58:10 AM AEST
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One of my favorites. I've found your style very... gracefull. You seldom stumble in your writing, and your heart seeks out the sweetest words to say. You have a loving, beautiful heart. May you hear it's melody soon.
I've enjoyed the pathe through your words, thank you.
Take care.
David |
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:31:42 PM AEST
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Awesome susie Q!!! This was so sweet and loving. A gentle and
touching write. You will find all you seek. Feel it. Believe it! Such a
kind and caring heart shall not linger long without the warmth a
most deserving soul. Beautiful Susie!
*hugs*
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 10:38:01 PM AEST
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| This is very good. I like the imagery and the soothing places this poem takes me to. |
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:45:11 AM AEST
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Every night as the sun gently sets
The stars emerge to blanket the sky
Daisies close their petals gracefully
As the moon settles way up high
Smiles at Sue..
Oh Sue.. you are in love with love.. you know what.. you are very highly a loving person.. so gentle.. just you wait.. something is waiting for you.. its in store.. no.. its not about a man from earth.. its Jesus..its His world.. I feel you so much.. oh Sue.. huggies...
Oh Sue... be in love with love in nature.. keep writing this beautiful stuff with your heart.. that love you write does come from up above.. never forget what I tell you.. it is solid gold.. from above.. keep writing this type of literature.. I will be right there with ya.... In a while.....
RLD.. |
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by robertdavidson on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:38:27 AM AEST
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Such a longing for love expressed through exquisite imagery. A pleasure to read.
Robert Davidson. |
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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Very beautifull writing.
huggs,
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Re: My Heart's Melody...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 10:14:22 AM AEST
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| What else can I say, utterly beautiful....Mike |
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