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My First
Contributed by
daprdan
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To me she was the very best,
Clearly heads above the rest,
She was so sweet, the best I've had,
I bragged of her, to Mom and Dad,
She never argued, always gave in,
It never mattered what my whim,
I treated her right was always kind,
Even loud music she didn't mind.
For me she always wore her best,
No matter what the given test,
A lady she was, the finest around,
And wouldn't you know, she stood her ground.
She was the finest in the land,
Her love for me was always grand,
I loved that lady and do today,
But time had passed, we parted ways.
Pillowy white with red/gray interior,
Her front seat and back were always superior,
GM has cut her from the lineup,
No more Olds, for Buick I'll sign up.
Copyright ©
daprdan
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2005-10-03 22:12:00]
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Re: My First
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by expired_promises on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:39:27 PM AEST
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| when i read the title i wasn't sure what to expect.....great twist at the end!! |
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Re: My First
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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Absolutely fabulous!!! :-D
it really made me giggle x
My dad used to send a christmas card to his car,
he hid it under the visor so mum wouldn't find it!
Star x x x
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