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The Breakup
Contributed by
carlton
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I leave messages on your machine,
Written countless unanswerred letters,
Memories of our great love flood my mind,
Must this love die after so long?
Dead roses lie in a vase I gave you,
Torn up pictures that miror my torn heart,
Words said of hatred and sorrow,
Oh, how I regret that dreadful night.
I call you in hope of hearing your voice,
you answer and i can hear your breath,
I try to tell you I love you and want to be with you,
There is silence and then the line goes dead.
I receive a letter with excitement and tear it open,
But I read it with sadness in my heart,
You tell me that what we had was not meant to be
I fall to the floor with only my tears to comfort me.
Your tears seal this envelope that contains a dagger in my heart,
my tears blot out the words of this dreadful letter.
You say I must continue on without you in my life,
Now your words mean as much to me as the dirt i walk upon.
Copyright ©
carlton
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2005-10-03 21:31:47]
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Re: The Breakup
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by sick_n_twisted on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:47:40 PM AEST
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| nice poem...i love how u wrote this....its deep and really emotional im going threw the same thing... |
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Re: The Breakup
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:14:23 PM AEST
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| this is a great work, especialy since you didn't even write from personal experience |
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