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Lost Thought
Contributed by
xxdeathxTOxkristixx
on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 08:34:51 PM in AEST
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abstract
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A word they say,
is made of gold.
when caravans,
and castles fold.
into the sea,
then turn to cold.
when night is dark,
and people sold.
Then out the window,
through the night.
the spectral of,
the northern light.
ben franklin and,
the electric kite.
the moon and sun,
forever fight.
Then to the sea,
the wind does blow.
winter's slumber,
blanket of snow.
the tranquil river's,
northern flow.
our founding fathers,
will never know.
Copyright ©
xxdeathxTOxkristixx
... [
2005-10-03 20:34:51]
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Re: Lost Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:32:44 PM AEST
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Nice! I like this. This gave off some good imagery, and it had a great flow. Please, get 'Lost in thought' more often : )
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Re: Lost Thought
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by secretwind on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:29:57 PM AEST
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this flow had me drifting
well done. |
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Re: Lost Thought
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 12:06:44 AM AEST
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| this is one eloquent hawt sex poem. |
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