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Artist with a Blade
Contributed by
myfinalbreath
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:41:32 PM in AEST
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Beautiful shapes
Grotesquely formed
Works of art
Marks of scorn
The razor's kiss
Bringing such pain
But with each strike
Relief is gained
The flowing blood
So warm and wet
A shocking sight
You can never forget
Scars so white
Will never fade
A reminder of how
I ease my pain
Copyright ©
myfinalbreath
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2005-10-03 19:41:32]
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Re: Artist with a Blade
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:51:14 PM AEST
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Wow. It's an awesome poem, the words just leap out at you. It's amazing the imagery and the metaphors are simply astounding. The emotions are so passionate, an you can hear the heartache basically ringing in your ears. I do hope things get better for you. Your writing is impeciable, keep up the good work :) Nice Write.
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Re: Artist with a Blade
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 08:02:50 PM AEST
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I find this very disturbing and deep.
I can tell that your hurting inside .
if you ever need to talk let me know.
take care
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Re: Artist with a Blade
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:58:19 AM AEST
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great write. its dark and deep. i love how you explained this poem. i know how you feel just remember your not alone theres alot of others that feel this way as well i used to hate talking about it and hate reading about this but now i can finally say it
well done grat write
Dee, |
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Re: Artist with a Blade
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by sweetestsin101 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:44:27 PM AEST
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wonderful write. i understand compleatly sadly enuff. it really speaks. good job.
~*~LEXI~*~ |
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Re: Artist with a Blade
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by Joseph_Grey on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 10:05:20 AM AEST
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| Great approach to a touchy subject, really cool poem and a level of expression that a lot of poets can't achieve. Thanks. |
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