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Hollow-ed
Contributed by
xpixiexdustx
on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:25:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Sick in the mind
Unkind,
Rewind,
Stop,.. now..
You took it all somehow
Dead inside
No pride
Frustration,
Enticing temptation
Self-mutilation
My only salvation
Like a beautiful art
Helps the pain depart
Slice by slice
Each cut precise
Lies, Lies, Lies and Deceit
Left me incomplete
For this you must pay,
Not now, but someday
So when you see me coming your way
Run, run far away,
For it'll be your blood I'll spray.
Copyright ©
xpixiexdustx
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2005-10-03 19:25:06]
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Re: Hollow-ed
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:34:07 PM AEST
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Wow lol i love how you express your emotions .great job.
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Re: Hollow-ed
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by strider on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:39:57 AM AEST
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fine job, I like the way you layed it out - your lines - terrific.
Felix |
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Re: Hollow-ed
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by ChibiMiroku on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:00:08 AM AEST
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| Wow. Lots of deliberate emphasis on the violence...but still. Well described poems! |
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