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2 steps forward 3 steps back
Contributed by
suprasurfer
on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:05:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cause my own pain
Of this I am certain
With the actions I take
I draw back the curtain
Yet theres no flood of light
In me darkness prevails
How do I still struggle
As the grim reaper hails
Theres no hope I can see
As my hearts ripping out
As the tears of blood flow
No one hears my shout
Screaming for death
Incontent with this life
"Help me God!" I cry
As I reach for the knife
Copyright ©
suprasurfer
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2005-10-03 18:05:59]
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Re: 2 steps forward 3 steps back
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:44:40 PM AEST
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intense write. Nice flow and expression. Please please dont reach for that knife there are brighter days to come
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Re: 2 steps forward 3 steps back
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 11:34:55 PM AEST
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good flow on this this was a very emotional write.. i enjoyed reading this alot
great job
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Re: 2 steps forward 3 steps back
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by strider on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 10:37:08 AM AEST
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| I like the layout and flow partern of this poem, good work |
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