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the old lady
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The old Lady
So delicate and thin her fingers
her wedding ring slips off.
What sweet a smile she has, her
hair is moonlight on rim frost,
…and her eyes are milky blue
seeing only the distant past.
Translucent she is and soon she
will be the wind and memory
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2003-01-19 05:00:00]
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Re: the old lady
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by Engarde on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:49:07 AM AEST
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Re: the old lady
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by kegs04 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 07:50:26 PM AEST
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simple, and sweet, but maybe it needs more elaboration? very poetic tho keep up the great work!
~peace out!
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