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Euphimisms
Contributed by
Rae
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:48:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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what have we become my friend?
horoscopes give us hope.
funny how two people who want the same thing
cannot find it in each other.
your horoscope says
a simple conversation
leads to a passionate entanglement.
put the drugs away,
i'll put the headphones down.
let's make out.
coz we're both bad news.
two carnivores seek to play house.
one pretty lady seeking attention.
my constant has left me.
her happiness is mine as well.
two cigarette smokers advice each other
it's dangerous for your health.
and yet they dream of canada.
if not stockholm.
smoker number 1 aka the bandit
offers a plane ticket to
smoker number 2 aka the magazine girl.
10 years could happen you know.
one pretty boy still dry as ever.
i want the pretty boy.
he wants his pharmaceutics.
- Rae'05. 100205. Sun. 1:32 AM.
100305. Mon. 3:21 AM.
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Rae
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Re: Euphimisms
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:56:22 AM AEST
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Hm a very interesting poem, sometimes horrorscopes usually compare, how you are, sometimes they can sound just like you or reflect something that actually might be happening in your life at that specific moment.
Do you believe in fate? That your life is planned out for you? Do you believe that your life might be based on a certain star constellation that might determine your fate? Or what might happen to you? *Rose* |
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Re: Euphimisms
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by Davinah on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 04:12:52 AM AEST
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| Very nice write... |
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Re: Euphimisms
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:54:37 PM AEST
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very cool. I particually loved the line "two carnivores seek to play house" as well as the last two lines "i want the pretty boy./
he wants his pharmaceutics." |
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Re: Euphimisms
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:13:53 AM AEST
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This poem is awsome not 2 mention right on the money with thruth, yes what have we become? beautiful rae, simply magnificent
question as well as a poem.
Ben |
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