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Untouched
Contributed by
Davinah
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 02:28:26 AM in AEST
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You spoke the saddest words I had ever heard
You told the meanest lies I ever believed
and I bought them all…
I would have been willing to take it all
For just a little piece of you
Yet you left me empty-handed
And now even less than nothing is what I’ve got
Far on the other side from you
Glad to have left you behind
Still your awfulness lingers in my mind
You were the biggest evil I’ve ever witnessed
You filled my heart with pure hatred
I left my mark on you
And wherever you go I’ll be there
You’re cursed to carry the sad truth
That I could never be touched by you
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2005-10-03 02:28:26]
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Re: Untouched
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by kerrah681 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 02:44:29 AM AEST
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| Hell yes, this poem is excellent to say the least, I love it when I read a poem outloud because I cant help myself, Ive felt this way about one certain person in my past, I feel like your actually talking about him! The last three lines rocked my world, those were powerful words. You should be very proud of this poem, its so unveiling of what has happened to you with this person, again I loved it, thanks for sharing, please take time to read my essay and comment, its long so I dont get alot of comments for my work. Its called Inside MY Disease |
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Re: Untouched
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:28:52 AM AEST
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| Hm interesting poem, but how could you buy lies told, that you didn't believe, that part kind of through me off, I guess you must meant by that, to play along with them. Good write though. |
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Re: Untouched
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by Rae on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:53:38 AM AEST
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| definitely a great poem to read out loud. and i hope that person this is addressed to realizes what they've done. aaaa. i feel this. |
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Re: Untouched
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by arakrune on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:17:49 AM AEST
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well done
hope who it is about hears it |
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Re: Untouched
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by Maxximus on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 04:23:10 PM AEST
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| Strong words and deeper meaning belies such a poem. Throughout it all you seem to draw upon some unseen strength and this poem is a testiment to all of us who are 'untouched'. very good. |
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