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when arent you
Contributed by
coolbreeze17
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:40:48 AM in AEST
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arent you suppose to want to scream and shout
when you bestfriend screams and shouts
when your bestfriends is sad
arent you suppose to be sad
when your best friend tells you her grades are going down
arent you suppose to sit her down and get to studying
when she confinds in you that her father beats her
arent you suppose to say she can stay with you
when she tells you that shes using drugs
arent you suppose to say you dont need them your better than that
when shes tells you all she wants to do is be alone
arent you suppose confort her and say ill never leave you alone
when she explains that know one loves her
arent you suppose to hold her tight and say over and over
again i love you
when the your bestfriend decides that its her time to die
arent you suppose to feel alone and scared
when all she does is screams and shouts at you
arent you suppose to be sad
but when somebody dies
what do you do suppose you do then
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Re: when arent you
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:35:58 AM AEST
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| Hm a very interesting poem, but I would have to disagree with When Your Best Friend Is Say, Arent You Suppose To Be Sad To. I would have to say No because whenever I am sad I would want somebody to try to cheer me up and make me happy because in the same situation, I would do that for them to, we would go out and have fun, not thinking about it nor worrying about it. The rest I agree with. You will always be lonely and scared if somebody you love is going to die but the best thing you can do is remember all of the good times, because in your mind, they never die. *Rose* |
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Re: when arent you
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by Queentzie on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 07:58:36 AM AEST
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| It's so sad. I liked it... ALOT |
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