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WHY SHAVE
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:30:37 AM in AEST
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Once again I showered and shaved,
only to sit all alone tonight
I longed to be held tight
but was lefted shaved and unsaved..
The razor flowed slowly over my legs,
making them so nice for you to feel
now here i am with my popcorn and beer'
just another night with out my lover.
My work takes me away every night of the week
so i save my weekends just for you,
then your work takes our time,
what ever will we do.
We've been together a while now,
yet when we get to the moment of making love
something always goes wrong
and i'm left asking
WHY DID I EVEN BOTHER TO SHAVE MY LEGS?
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brokenwings
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2005-10-03 00:30:37]
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Re: WHY SHAVE
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by OzChick on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:22:37 AM AEST
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Been there, done that. Married ten years now and have two kids. Too tired and too busy to even think about shaving most of the time, and when you do.........Kids! LOL.
Nice, funny poem though. Cheers. |
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Re: WHY SHAVE
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:23:47 AM AEST
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I liked this, I felt that it started out a little rough but by the second verse and onwards had a better flow (no shaving puns intended).
Anyway, we boys like smooth legs cause we dont have them. |
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Re: WHY SHAVE
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:41:26 PM AEST
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| There are jobs that i hear this about all the time. I understand loneliness although not for that reason. You have shown how you feel well. |
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Re: WHY SHAVE
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by Chilibear on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:39:09 PM AEST
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Wow, awesome poem. I can see where you're coming from. I really loved this. Keep it up!
- Chili |
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Re: WHY SHAVE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 06:22:05 PM AEST
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| I'm still sitting here pondering the exact smae question. Thanks to your poem, I have decided--if he wants a date, HE's gonna come over and shave my legs first...you should do the same.. |
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