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blood drips down
Contributed by
sweetestsin101
on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:25:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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i dry my tears with
the blood stained rag
thinking over and over again
money... all this over money
daddy, u left the country for what...
money.
i never had a father, and when i do
u leave me... for money
did it even occur to you
that i might want a dad?
i think this as the blood drips down my wrist
i glance at the knife i had
laughing at how all i had to do
was make one "slip"
of my hand
and it would be all over
no father, no mother, not even a step-mom or half brother anymore
dad, u took my step-mom and brother,
u pushed mommy away
u left me with my grandparents
daddy......... maybe you can think about that while you watch the blood drip down your daugher's wrists
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Re: blood drips down
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by sweetestsin101 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:41:01 AM AEST
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| lemme know if it is good. my aol sn is swtstsn9 if ppl wanna talk. i wanna work more on gettin them 2 make sence. lemme kno how im doin please |
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Re: blood drips down
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:21:37 AM AEST
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| poetry doesnt have to make sense, this is filled with emotion, well done |
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Re: blood drips down
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by ArmyBrat on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:44:46 PM AEST
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| very awesome alot of emotions show ur true feelings. good job i like ur poems. |
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Re: blood drips down
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:56:04 PM AEST
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| so deep and sad. |
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Re: blood drips down
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:33:10 PM AEST
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A sad, deep and emotional write.
I'm so sorry for all the pain and suffering you've been through. May God guide ur fragile heart. Keep penning down ur emotions. A sad, but well written poem.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: blood drips down
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:27:23 AM AEST
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| Great write! |
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