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I love you like a gun
Contributed by
needs_change
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:02:05 PM in AEST
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you are nothing special
you are not that great
so why do i still love you
when it's you i want to hate
if i had a gun
you be the first to go
i wouldn't hesistate
i would let you die slow
if he came to school
and pointed it at you
i would step between
i would never move
if i cannot kill you
no one ever will
for the heartache that you give me
is my only thrill
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Re: I love you like a gun
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by goddessofangels on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:37:27 AM AEST
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| wow....beautifully spoken!! you really know how to express how you feel in this poem, great job! |
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Re: I love you like a gun
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:35:17 AM AEST
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| i know that desire to hate someone when all you can do is love them, well expressed |
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