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my numbing pain
Contributed by
razor_perfect
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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feel the earth , benethe my feet
use the razor
cut it deep
***** the spirits
who took it all
let me go
let me fall
fall into
my own little world
leave me here to die alone
voices screamiing
inside my head
ghosts are hiding
under my bed
stab the heart
that made me bleed
i cna't breathe
when i fall to my knees
angels screaming
no one cares
i'll slice again
if i dare
***** the feelings
i never have
***** not knowing
when im sad
it's an every day thing
i'm giving up
my heart beats fast
i think i'll erupt
no one here
to dry my tears
never knowing
to hide my fears
***** the people
that make me cry
i can get away
when i'm high:D
but htey took that too
they say it's bad
if they touch me agian
i'll beat someones ass
i hate the liars
that ***** around
feel the thunder
benethe the ground
there u go , a ******* piece of work, yay~!
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Re: my numbing pain
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:22:13 PM AEST
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| Yea life sucks rotten eggs sometimes but do we just wallow in our mess or do we get up and clean ourselves up? I like your poem but it sounds like you are giving up and if you do everything that happens to you after that deserves to happen. To make myself clear i am saying DO'NT GIVE UP. life hurts a while for everyone. I almost gave up; life is still tough but I am never gonna give up again. |
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Re: my numbing pain
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:41:14 PM AEST
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come on. GET UP!
It's not that hard, you know?
feel the earth, grasp some grass, but never mind...
pull yourself onto your feet.
its as simple as A, B, C.
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: my numbing pain
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 04:43:43 PM AEST
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a sad poem, i can feel ur pain from here
xXx |
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