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Our Love
Contributed by
AssassinatorGirl
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:41:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't write happy things in a poem,
Only in a paragraph.
There are so many things I want to show him,
But I just can't get it out.
Beautiful, kind, perfect and pure,
With a flap of his wings he turns me like him.
What to even say, I'm not really sure,
how could I possibly express all the love within?
And when he's unhappy,
My world is dark and bleak.
When I think of kissing him,
I cannot even speak.
It's too good to imagine,
Just lying in his arms.
Safe and secure from it all,
I want to take away what harms.
All I want is to have him
All I want is to give him the greatest happiness.
I wish I could write my love in the wind,
So whenever it blew he'd think of us.
And he'd be filled with smiles,
He would never have to cry.
Even though I wasn't there,
He'd feel as if I was.
Three thousand miles away,
But if feels like an inch.
When I think it can't get closer,
Somehow it does.
The tiniest gap gets smaller and thinner,
And nothing keeps us apart but land and time.
But time will pass,
and land will be traveled.
They can't keep us apart for long,
No matter if they've all hearts of gravel,
Because ours are of pure, untainted love,
And that's all I'd ever ask him of.
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AssassinatorGirl
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2005-10-02 20:41:17]
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Re: Our Love
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:33:06 PM AEST
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| I wish you the best. This is a good honest write. You expressed your emotions well. |
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Re: Our Love
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by anitajames on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:29:05 PM AEST
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Reminds me of the line from "A Walk to Remember" about love being something you cant see, but like the wind, you can feel it touching you. Simply beautiful.
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Re: Our Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:25:25 PM AEST
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i loved this write. My god itd beautiful. I thought the best lines were about the wind how you wish you could write your love in it, wonderfully written.
keep writing
keep smiling
sweetstranger |
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