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Woman By The Sea
Contributed by
daprdan
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Brazen woman by the sea by the sea,
Saving all your love for me,
Until the day I'll be I'll be,
In your arms and one with thee.
Loving notes I get from you,
Inspire this man that feels so blue,
Longing love the whole night through,
Instilled by all these dreams of you.
T'was written into both our charts,
Life has raised us two apart,
But more than love's held in these hearts,
And now awaits to world impart.
Love will reign that all can see,
This special love awaiting me,
To you I pledge a vow to be,
My love of woman by the sea.
Copyright ©
daprdan
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2005-10-02 20:05:14]
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by JonCart3r on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:17:29 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed your flow of words. and you have an awsome way of using imagery. I liked it a lot. |
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by Spike on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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a wonderful, lilting metre, and a sweet take on vows of chastity for separated betrothed.
I very much enjoyed this.
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:55:06 PM AEST
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| Great poem. The word choice was fantastic. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:12:59 PM AEST
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| I like this, in it is hidden purity and honour. Your words speak volumes about love. |
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by anitajames on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:26:28 PM AEST
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I really love this. There is something so innocent and sincere about it. Kind of rare these days. Great write.
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by goddessofangels on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:47:54 AM AEST
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| Amazing poem! This is so sweet, you write the words your heart seems to yell so i must say great job! |
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Re: Woman By The Sea
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by gwenevere on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 02:00:24 PM AEST
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| Oh, yes, magic is in the air.Lovely poem.Could be a song, Ros |
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