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TrustSICKControl
Contributed by
Fair
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:04:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I' m hung over
From a night of being sober
I have a knot in my stomach
Trust is a weird thing
TRUST
Disobedience
Do you believe in Karma?
I wish i didn't
But I do
I feel sick
SICK
What a fickle word for something not altogether
Feasible
I'm sick of lying
Sick of living life not alive
Sick of living in these constraints
I put on myself
And pretend
Other people put on me too
I need control
CONTROL
Copyright ©
Fair
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2005-10-02 20:04:48]
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Re: TrustSICKControl
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by JonCart3r on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:23:21 PM AEST
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| wow.. i enjoyed it, and yes i feel the same way most of the time. |
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Re: TrustSICKControl
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:15:30 PM AEST
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| I actually feel the opposite, I feel and wish i had more constraints to save me from me. This is a good write though. |
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Re: TrustSICKControl
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by anitajames on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:32:23 PM AEST
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Oh Yeah. You wrote this about me didn't you? Just kidding. Feels like my picture should be posted next to it somehow. Great Job!
Ann |
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Re: TrustSICKControl
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by Davinah on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:34:21 AM AEST
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| I really loved this poem. Very strong in your face... |
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Re: TrustSICKControl
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by JIV3 on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:36:36 PM AEST
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| hey i like... keep up the sickness! |
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