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The Healingspirit
Contributed by
daprdan
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:03:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lying sleeping softly still,
Your ever present solid will,
Gently rise and fall your breasts,
Slow and rhythmic drawing breaths.
Angelic in your thoughts and deeds,
Planting always little seeds,
Of hope and love that ne'er bends sway,
Bringing forth another way.
Your gentle presence so demanding,
The love you share never ending,
Always worried still of others,
Spreading love unto another.
Low and slow your voice will start,
Explaining all with which one must part,
Worried still of all to be done,
Your thoughts of helping always run.
Quiet sleeping then you awake,
This day for you to now partake,
Gently stirring deep within,
So with the sun your day begins.
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daprdan
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2005-10-02 20:03:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Healingspirit
(User Rating: 1 ) by JonCart3r on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:19:39 PM AEST (User
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Again, the way your words flow and the imagery you portray with your ideas gives me chills. You are a gifted poet, wow. |
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Re: The Healingspirit
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:19:07 PM AEST (User
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I like this. It seems like you are talking about a person who encourages you. I think that is cool. |
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Re: The Healingspirit
(User Rating: 1 ) by gwenevere on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:56:00 PM AEST (User
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And they will take that sunshine with them wherever they go.a lovely poem, Ros |
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