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If...
Contributed by
daprdan
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:57:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If graced with just a single chance
I wish to join you in a dance...
If graced with love you will impart
I wish to keep it in my heart...
If graced in opportunity
I want there be a unity
If more than love between is shared
I want you will allow it paired
If graced I am that you accept
I pledge our life you won't regret
If graced we are in hovels nest
I'd still be honored and feel blessed
If graced we are to join as one
I'd fight to death your honor won
If graced I am, they're brought about
I will from mountains shout it out
That we are one unto the end
That love for us will provide wend
These pledges I do make to you
These vows I pledge for all to view
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daprdan
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2005-10-02 19:57:31]
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Re: If...
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:21:50 PM AEST
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A beautiful expression of love and commitment.
Lovely write.
*hugs*
Shannon |
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Re: If...
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:57:27 PM AEST
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| Wow great write. I haven't seen this use of repetition. Good job. |
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