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Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:21:55 PM in AEST
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Take a look
What do you see
A person who, is running free
Freely frolicing, and no big doubts
The wind is blowing
No need to watch out
A silly laughter is what I need
To laugh, and blush and lose all greed
To make the eyes, once sparkle free
To wonder who else, could be Peachy?
I know this write, seems way out
But, sometimes, friends give that certain turnout
So, when the feeling of blueness, returns
Find a Dark shadow, and tell them they earned
Copyright ©
brew
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2005-10-02 17:21:55]
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 09:59:47 PM AEST
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lol. this is unique i'll give u that, even hopeful,
yet i get the feeling, sadness is lurking
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by brew on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:13:55 PM AEST
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| nah ben, this is a write about a friend, who gave me laughter again.....and they do it, with out being cautious about it.! thats why its way out, they are that, and more.! thanks ........ |
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:48:55 PM AEST
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Your friend is true in spirit and humanity. There is a time to laugh and a time to cry and good friends know the difference. Blessed be those that cross our path with real friendship in their hearts, not greed and need.
MR |
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:35:53 AM AEST
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we all need that silly laughter every now and then, '
good write
tasha |
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 11:15:18 AM AEST
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This is a cool write. I feel you are set free by friendship and the last verse shows you are willing to allow your friend to express the whole range of human emotions. After all, isn't that what friendship is all about?
peace and hugs, john |
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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Brew this is a great write. We need silly laughter in our lives. I'm glad you've been blessed with a friend who does this for you.
*hugs*
Sue, ED. |
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Re: Sparkling, Peachy, Friends
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:47:04 PM AEST
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A good friend can make all the difference in how you deal with things. Very good job expressing that brew.
True friends are hard to find, and the joy they bring is priceless: )
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