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I'm sorry
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 04:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I know I promised you I wouldn't
And I've been trying really hard
But today I couldn't hold it in
So I used my lil glass shard
As the glass moves across my skin
A bead of blood appears
falling down onto the floor
at the same time as my tears
I'm sorry I let you down again
But I just can't escape
I think it's time to realise
That this is my fate
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-10-02 16:00:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm sorry
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lollypopxcore on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 04:40:23 PM AEST (User
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I understand this.
It's so tempting when things get hard.
xoxoxoxo |
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Re: I'm sorry
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:01:38 PM AEST (User
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I was captured by the honesty in this write. It is full of the true emotion that you feel within. I do hope this is not your fate. Great write though. |
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Re: I'm sorry
(User Rating: 1 ) by xPixiexDustx on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:05:46 PM AEST (User
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I know what that's like. You did, indeed, capture that feeling well. Great job. |
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Re: I'm sorry
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kamal on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:29:21 AM AEST (User
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I really love this style of writing complete short and provocative.. |
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