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The Grim Reaper

Contributed by lillyjane on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He is in the room silently waiting,
beads of sweat upon his brow,
many people really hate him,
he knows it wont be long now,

He can hear her gasping breath,
he sees her slowly fade,
he opens up his cloak of death,
to take her to her grave.

Its not his fault she has to go,
the family can not keep her,
he didn't really want this job,
They made him - The Grim Reaper..

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2005-10-02 14:03:19]
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Re: The Grim Reaper (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:32:54 PM AEST
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an interesting write
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Re: The Grim Reaper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:39:09 PM AEST
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Hm this was a very interesting write, I liked it, I thought it kind of had a mild humour to it, lol, I understand what you're saying. I pictured the boss being the grim reaper though, always up your butt, lol. Whoopsies.

Re: The Grim Reaper (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:52:26 PM AEST
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I like this one very much, who'd be the Grim Reaper eh?! Well done lillyjane, keep writing.

Re: The Grim Reaper (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 11:15:26 AM AEST
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I like this, it has such a good point to it.

one of your best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep writing, reading your work makes my day, its so funny.

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