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love sucks
Contributed by
cutestmofo
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:38:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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OPEN THE DOOR
Open up the door and let my love shine through
Don’t close the door please let me love you
You’ve broken my heart not once but twice
Who was the fool who said love was nice
It’s a whole lot of heartbreak and much more pain
And it ain’t even worth the gain
Love sticks u like a blunt sword striking your heart
It hurts it hurts and u suddenly don’t feel anymore
I love you so why do you torment me so
My judgment is gone and my heart has gone blur
Love sucks but I’m still caught up in it
She’s playing my heart as she sees fit
She can stab me she can cheat and I’ll still come running back
Let’s just say love’s on the attack
And I’m a victim well I’m tired of running back to you
You’re not my angel or my honey and our love isn’t true
I’m not love’s soldier anymore
And I finally found the cure
To a broken heart and it didn’t take me long
It’s to forget about you and just move on
By Kerwin Etienne
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Re: love sucks
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:43:21 PM AEST
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Hey cutestmofo,
Very powerfull determind write.
U go now.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: love sucks
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:44:12 PM AEST
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such a sweet but sad poem keep it up
luv
jenni
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Re: love sucks
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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Good for you, and yes, it does suck!!!! Good expression. Hang in there, and keep up the writes.
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Re: love sucks
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by anangel_1593 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:23:13 PM AEST
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I feel like i'm actually there, watching you tell her to get a life! Nice job. keep up the great work,
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Re: love sucks
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:36:06 PM AEST
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i like the flow of this poem cool way to write it meaning isnt hard to see
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Re: love sucks
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:45:19 AM AEST
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| good write |
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