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Love Me
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:59:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Connect to me
We are so far apart
Destiny
Is only a myth of the heart
I can assure you
From your eyes I will never part
Common to the thread
Which is sown and binds
Piecing together
A better picture, of pure love
A realer touch
Stolen hands soaked in the fake tears
Its not enough
Never fast enough
I preferred it slow as opposed to rough
You think this is funny
I wish this were sad
Love me
I am not worthy of your love
Above
Is the only place I can trust
Forgive me
For the pain I caused myself
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2005-10-02 12:59:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:51:49 PM AEST (User
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Very interesting, but I believe that destiny is something that we all live for since we are going to die anyway, do you believe in fate? I believe that there can be fate, can you believe that your life is all planned out for you? SLipSiX. Good write. |
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Re: Love Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 11:21:47 AM AEST (User
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//Stolen hands soaked in the fake tears//
Incredible, yet solemn line.
Your poetry lives on.
~Scorps |
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