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Melting Into You
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:03:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was out walking
thinking of nothing
when something sweet and delicious
made me pause
and smile,
a face in the crowd
gave me sensations and visions
that are erotically thrilling.
When she smiled I fell In love
wanna kiss her love her hold her all night long
she's so sweet oh I savor her flavor
she is thee one I adore,
I don't remember
if she's black or white...
all I know is I am feeling so good
and I
don't wanna be without her love anymore.
I slowly crack as she touches me
I can no longer front
I can't hide
I'm wide open,
I look into her eyes and I am hypnotised
I see the words she speaks
drip from her lips
and I hear the sounds of the ocean....
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secretwind
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2005-10-02 11:03:49]
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Re: Melting Into You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:25:20 PM AEST
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I love this! The way you worded it...its a very romantic poem...she must be someone very special...very well done!
Shari :) |
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Re: Melting Into You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:46:15 PM AEST
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Like I said, jus drippen with honey.
huggs, big ole smiles,
emy |
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Re: Melting Into You
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:36:02 PM AEST
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Nice! You have a unique style to your love poems. I enjoyed this read, and the feelings it conveyed.
Scorp. |
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Re: Melting Into You
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by NoangelNohope on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:00:50 PM AEST
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| the girl this is about must mean alot to you...she's very lucky to have met you :) :* |
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Re: Melting Into You
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 11:37:28 PM AEST
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Good write. I like the flow of your words.
(Lovewise I am looking for something a bit deeper.) |
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Re: Melting Into You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:27:45 PM AEST
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soooo beautiful and romantic
Love it... ty for sharin this piece
someone been struck by cupids arrow lol
Wish you the best
Huggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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