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Ode To Friendship
Contributed by
Darkhorse71
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:41:16 AM in AEST
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Oh what a joy to see your face
on each new breaking day!
Your youth and beauty are so great
I know they'll always stay.
Your head is so filled up with thoughts,
your mind is such a treasure;
that when you choose to share it all
it gives me so much pleasure.
The world is filled with so much pain,
it's a cold and desolate place.
It wakes me up to look and see
the life that you embrace.
You always have a caring heart
and a smile for those in need.
You give yourself to everyone
and know nothing of greed.
Even though you have your share
of problems in your life,
you're quick to laugh, and full of fun;
You don't give in to strife.
I'm grateful for the time we've shared,
you've made me laugh with tears.
You make my life a better place,
a friend to last for years.
darkhorse71
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Darkhorse71
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:19:03 AM AEST
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I hear heaven in these rare words.
Makes a gal smile biggerin Texas!
Someone is very lucky to be your friend.
Big smiles,
huggs,
emy
Oh a masterpeice can't leave that out. |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by remote on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:49:32 AM AEST
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"The world is filled with so much pain,
it's a cold and desolate place."
Terrible two lines or your view of what world is, it all depends where you are looking, rest of it was just okay. Nice sentiments for a friend, I am sure, and your friend would be quite pleased to read this. |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by Ivy on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 09:59:29 AM AEST
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| Lovely ode about friendship!!! |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:11:24 AM AEST
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*thunderous applause*
Wow, John! This was spectacular. I loved it! What a beautiful
and loving poem for a friend. It's great when you have people
like that to count on and you expressed your appreciation with such aplomb!
Great job John. Enjoyed this immensely!
~Breezy |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:09:45 PM AEST
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I've read several really good friendship poems the past few days, and this one is right up there as well. Great job, and your thoughts just flowed along. Sounds like an awesome friend, and you must be too, to write such a nice poem.
Scorp. |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:24:43 PM AEST
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| most lovely tribute it flowed perfectly and brought forth the beauty of your pen and heart |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:58:25 PM AEST
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I have to agree with EmyStar and I know Texas like the back of my hand, lol. John, this is a truly great dedication of friendship.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Ode To Friendship
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:54:14 AM AEST
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| I have been thinking about reading this poem for the past few days. I am glad i did it today. I know people I can say this about. Thanks for such a great and honest write. |
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